Wonderful - absolutely magnificent.
There was a tune in here from the flute that I recognized - one I used to imagine I believe. I mostly see a final fight, one where all the heros are looking back upon their journey and gathering the strength to shove one more time against the evil beast that threatens all of existence - all of creation. It's now or never, so let's get a move on, na? It's time to fight.
I really like the start...
It's doing good so far - I can't think of anything for it. Other than to let it become more epic over time, and maybe take out the last few bits because it causes the song to calm down. I like how you didn't have too much repetition - too much repetition often kills it for me - songs are like stories, not singular beats.
I think during one of the parts, you could try to make this same tune, but with a flush of musical notes (such as 'plinking' sounds of various pitches) and whatnot, while also having some of the original part to it. I think that might sound cool. And when I say original part, I'm referring to the original kind of musical tunes. Doing good so far, I have high hopes for this song.
And it's often when you think that you're doing bad that you're actually doing good. Especially lately. :D I notice it happens a lot for me like that. X)
Hehe, thank you very much, Andy! I hope the final version will sound awesome to you, of course I'll do my best to tell a good story. ;D
Beautiful voice...
I can't totally relate, but I think Nicole to some degree might, depending on the choices she makes in the future and whatnot.
I suppose to a degree I can relate as well though, toward Nicole; although I think I'd like her more because she'd be colder - I'm always so warm - or something. Overly hot - I like having cool air blowing against my face and such. Either way, I'd love having her company, because of how much I tremble based on where I'm at so far in life.
First time...
Someone's asked me to check out something of theirs after it came out.
I really enjoy it, despite the repetitive-ness of it in the beginning and seemingly as it goes along, the tunes work with it, so it still feels like a story.
It almost reminds me of a megaman tune in one part, and I kind of enjoy that, as well as a Sonic the Hedgehog 2.
It feels similar to someone who was lost but then found - like two brothers coming back together again after long last...
Feels very nice. Dreamy almost, surreal, might work with the Pendragon series (I actually finished reading the final one on Friday - better than the other nine combined in my opinion).
Hmm... Second time listening, feels like me or somebody else fighting gracefully and gallantly through a mob of enemies, constantly trying to move forward, occasionally maybe just pushing some enemies onto their backs...? Then constantly moving forward.
Running and then jumping off a cliff, throwing the sword to the side, diving down below into the water, pain washing over the body as they start to swim, trying to get through it, making waves, taking everything they've experienced up 'til now as strength, surfacing, starting to stroke their way forward until they come upon a small boat with somebody inside, a fisher in the middle of nowhere seemingly, who welcomingly greets this soaking wet person as he rocks the boat by getting up and inside, breathing hard. The somewhat old man asks what brings him here, and the young man answers, still dripping.
(about here if not earlier is when it started again)
The old man nods and hums a tune as he puts his rod down and turns to face the young man, grabbing the oars and beginning to stroke toward what the young man just has to have faith is land.
He gets nervous over time, slowly drying off, glad that this man is doing this for him, and when the old man keels over, dropping one of the oars into the water, the young man goes to his side, and (having not talked to him ever since earlier), grabs him and sets him gently to the side as he picks up an oar, asks the man if he's alright, who brushes it off, and begins to stroke toward the sun, the direction the old man had been going for awhile, occasionally making waves in the water of fishies as he strays occasionally, enjoying what he sees, and trying to find what might be the real way to where he's going.
The old man talks a bit, and the young man answers, unsure slightly of himself. They keep going like this, sharing stories with one another, and getting to know one another.
It goes on for more than this, it's definitely not happily ever after, so I might attempt to add on later, na? :O
Very good song.
Good title too.
Only thing I could ever ask is longer and a bit more variety because of that. :)
Woha, thank you very much for this great review, HolyDemonAndy!
Awesome, how you are able to "build" stories to songs, I would be very happy if I had that much fantasy! Thanks, again! :D
Way too repetitive...
For my tastes - in the beginning and whatnot. It just doesn't change enough. Sounds may sound good, but unless they're telling a story it gets annoying hearing them over and over again.
You did good with the song though in my opinion. 8/10 - 4/5.
Work on not using the same sound combinations over and over again please. Well, like, three or more times. Focus on showing emotion, not just writing music for music's sake; although sometimes cool-sounding things are good as well.
ok, thanks for the honest review. ill work on that<3
Cool.
Just utterly cool. Awesomest of awesomeness.
Only problem I had with it that I could tell was near the end, if I remember correctly, regarding the 'ping' rate. But that was only one, and more than likely personal preference. X)
Besides, nobody and nothing's perfect, right? ;D ^,^ Lol.
Very good song, awesomest of awesomeness. 500%u263C/5 and 10,000/10 - IT'S OVER NAIHNE THOUSAHHHNDD!!! X) Lol.
Thank you! I don't know what you mean by ping rate though, sadly. :(
and nope! nobody should ever strive for being perfect, it'll take forever. XD
just like duke nukem forever ho-ho-ha-ha T_T >.>
anyway, thank you for the nice words! XD
I can almost see you as you do this.
And I have to say, it's wonderful - especially of a sight. You obviously enjoy the piano and music, and through you, I enjoy it all the more than I ever did.
And I enjoyed it quite a bit before this, mind you. ;)
Heh. ^,^;
*Popped your review cherry on your most recent song* :o :3
I think this is my last one for today. :)
After all, I have school today. X3 Lol. <,< I like the lamenting. I really do. The way you put it here it's beautiful and sad and conveys a lot of emotion, and is obviously enthusiastic. :3
Lol. I like the name of the file.
W00t. ;)
Very well done indeed. ^,^
I like the happy-go-lucky feel to it, it really suits it, and I don't always like such things, but I think I just got a special place in my heard for shindigs. ^,^ :D
This is so...
Wonderful and beautiful!! Especially the first part.
I'm actually part Sicillian, part Jewish, and part Norwegian, but all American!! ^,^
And my name's Andrew. :3
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