That was downright awesomeness! Really truly!!!
Reasons for awesomeness...
1. The easter eggs, lol.
2. it's obvious (or at least it appeared to me) that you put a lot of effort into this.
3. You apparantly know how to do certain things in final cut (or whatever it is you use) and in flash to get a specific effect.
4. You made it so you can choose your own path. Even though the only thing different is how he gets into the next room which is kind of like how people who host role play games and whatnot do when the characters try (whether on purpose or not) to get off the preset path, though sometimes it's actually possible to get something different.
5. You added humor though you didn't comepletly saturate it with "humor" (when I put it in quotes I mean like what some people do when they add immature humor). For example you actually put easter eggs, and there was a point to the humor that you used. Though I think I could've done with out the fart thing.
6. You used solarize I'm pretty sure, which is my default favorite effect (btw did you know you can add more then just one solarize? Also that you can invert the solarizes and change the amount it's solarized?).
7. It's also great because you tried to add as much detail to the background as possible!
Something I think you should've changed is (well it's the only thing I can think of right now) what the virus is called. I think it should've been called the "G-Shroom" or the "G-Shrooms". Also btw, wasn't there a thing called the G-virus as well in the video game series?
One thing I just want to mention is that I'm trying to more or less do a tribute/mixture of stuff as well when it comes to the Fatal Frame series and school and whatnot, y'know? I've been inspired and apparantly you have as well. It's a really good idea, stick with it, I look forward to the other parts in the series. You have some good potential. Never give up. Damnit... I feel like there's something I'm forgetting to mention... ah well. Maybe I'll think of it later. Anyways...
Some things I definitly think you should add to the next one (OH! That reminds me, I think what I wanted to say earlier was about how I was and still am expecting to find out that Princess Peach is a zombie, though I'm kind of hoping I turn out to be wrong) is more choices, maybe actually have a change in the storyline for some choices and just make something different happen like you did in this one for most of the other "choose your own path" kinda' thing, y'know?
I CAN'T WAIT TILL' THE NEXT ONE!!! :O :D :O :D :O :P :O :P :D :P :D :P :O :D
(Reason for 6 on violence is because it's not too violent but it does have at least some violence in it if I remember correctly).